Monday, October 8, 2007

Constitute a view (my position)

I strongly confirm my belief for my position because in up most honesty I believe that America needs to regard woman in higher standards and even the possibly for Presidency. Not only the women in government, but women in other positions such as in companies. The major conflict that is established is that people are not ready to accept women to hold higher positions like CEO than men. I think that women should have a potential to do better then men because according to statistics and studies women in fact work harder and they ensure that the quality of their work is acceptable. In this defense, other countries have in fact, women, in the work force and they are able to be more efficient as well as productive. Countries such as India, England and Africa have more women in their government even as position as President. The public comes to be divided among this coming election because of the several candidates running. Not only do the people need to open their eyes to such an idea but women need to stop being held back and pursue their goals, now so that even little girls in the future can grow up to dream that they can be President this life long dream can be a success with one more person moving ahead.

My intention of my research is to bring to attention that women rights’ have been established for a reason and women need to come to an up rise and rise upon this to take a stance. Hillary Clinton currently has been a hot topic because she is trying to fill a substantial role and follow the footsteps of her husband and the men that held Presidency prior in history. Her footsteps are making their way in and it will become a concrete path when she or another woman in fact wins the elections.

For my argument is will be hard to persuade my audience that women are not efficiently represented with equality also showing the country’s downfall as to why woman have not taken this role earlier. To my understanding, people need to understand that we need to be more acknowledged for the work we contribute to society.

1 comment:

Christina F said...

Your strongest point is that womens rights have been established for a reason. Maybe you could go back in history and show examples of all the things that women have done in the past for the country which would than show what Hillary and many other women in the future ahve to offer for our country.